Fish Brain Clan (6) Loretta

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  1. nate says:

    Awww, poor Grace. May she rest in peace.
    Okay, back to the story! Bem’s a player, right? How does one handle three women? Oh I shd know. Shouldn’t I?

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  2. nene says:

    Hmmmmm Grace may ? RIP…sally pls don’t take us far frm amaka and james o,thnks happy bday again

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  3. su'eddie says:

    Wow. I enjoyed this. Now, I don’t really think Bem is a player, just human. It could have happened to anyone of us. It’s nice the way you have made these people to be really human. Your story is quite realistic and touching. The Grace substory is beautiful. Moskeda, well done on this. I enjoyed every bit of this story… Maybe the lead guy being Tiv constibuted too… Oh well…

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  4. su'eddie says:

    ‘Contributed’… Phew! Well done gal…well done.

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  5. Uche says:

    i have had to laugh in the previous episodes or chapters but as i read this there is a certain soberness i feel… Loretta is divine for wanting to gift the Doctor and his wife a child.

    Whoever Grace was, i bet she is playing with angels.

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  6. mrs oliver says:

    May u keep RIP Grace… I really enjoyed dis.. Wow! Am beginin to see a different side to Loretta, she’s a wonderful lady… Bem Bem Bem…. Hmmmmm *lip seal*

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  7. Dottaraphels says:

    Just when I think I got this one…..Sal you are wonderfully gifted! I love the tapestry of life you are weaving here, amidst the humour and outright madness in some scenes; you tell of LIFE! Imagined or real, everyone can identify with certain traits and this endears readers to your technicolor of awesome characters. I want more on the ex wife and of course Habeeba. Bems is a true gentleman methinks, but I will wait to see what he has to say for himself. Baby Grace, sleep on sweetheart, his bosom gives you warmth forever 🙂
    PS Loretta is a big gal…I believe it will be alright!

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  8. Emmanuel chux says:

    One big gift a good writer has is d power of language. Language means alot in literature. A writer must be versatile enough to know the register of every setting s/he is employing in his/her art.

    Sally, one thing that keeps me reading ur stories is ur use of language. Whenever u change ur settings and characters, i initially wondered if u cud keep faith with d language of d professions of d xters and of d settings. When im done reading, i stil wonder if u were trained in those settings and professions. U never missed the mark of what language is to literature. How fittly u talk in medical jargons here is an art worthy of study. May our 2nd nobel laurette be crowned.

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  9. Tonya says:

    RIP Grace that part made me cry. Beautiful plot Sally U r good keep this going

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  10. Diya Dan says:

    Grace…short life but not without an impact, u lived well dearie, RIP luv!
    Those summary u keep captioning r a pointer 2ur message I’m sure…I love dem! A peep into dis Bem xter wif an eye on Loretta promises 2b interesting…but wif u? There’s no telling…
    U have a rare gift Dearie! Ride on…

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