No Heart Feelings #1

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  1. che-koh! says:

    OMG!!! Seeee suspense. My heart almost jumped out of my throat!! Am so loving this story. Can’t wait for the next episode. Swetty u too much. Kudos!

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  2. Estizzy says:

    Ghen ghen!!! Can’t wait for the next episode ooooo!!!!!

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  3. Zee says:

    sally at it again ….well done. front row o….

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  4. nykelodeon says:

    Omo mehn!!!!! See as my pulse dey race!!!

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  5. Damilola Aasa says:

    Whaow. And the suspense begins. Sally,can you continue the story already? Kudos

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  6. degreatest2 says:

    Wow! What a story? Captivating.

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  7. Isaacola AA says:

    Sally! You’ve started again with your suspense! This is treacherous…

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  8. Oh boy. A?d I thought t?? story would end with Marie’s death. Wahala dey oh.

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  9. Irene says:

    Marie get mind

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  10. Mankind says:

    wow wow wow!!! Wat is he plannin 2 do she cnt sack d gal dis is very interestin. Keep up genius, i lyk it long

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  11. Ustyn says:

    Sally i cant stop offing my cap for you,i love the way you are riding us…nyc one

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  12. sexymarv says:

    I’m so excited, I’m almost high. So what next? He goes to Cyprus? Tell us (???_?????)

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  13. Jay says:

    DAMN! Sally…. You never fail to deliver sha! Inbetween the story I had to sit up and move to the edge of my seat. Your writing is amazing no doubt.

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  14. bertokoji says:

    You haff come again abi? Blow my mind away as always! You Rock

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  15. temi says:

    Anticipation, i’m sure dis wud be more than interesting. Well done.

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  16. enricka says:

    OMG,screaming and dancing!!!!!

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  17. yougeecash says:

    Goodness gracious! This was something! Phew! Madam, thou art the boss of intrigue, suspense, thriller… Lawd ha’ mercy! Brilliant stuff going on. I was suspicious though when she told him she loved him before she left and when she cried while they made love but nothing prepared me for the end. Kudos ma’am. I’m glued to your blog for real!

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  18. toyinfabs says:

    I dey front row, with my Popcorn bag very full. Welldone Sally. Now my head is busy trying to think of what the mystery could be. But I won’t task it cos I know I just might be very wrong.

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  19. zeenike says:

    Nice! Here was I thinking it was d same age old romance tragedy and etc etc, and then d story started. I’m really looking forward to the rest.

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  20. didimaks says:

    Awwww Sally dis is very captivatin, u did it again. Can’t wait for d next episode

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  21. herbby says:

    I jus dey gbadun u sha, Sally u r d bomb.

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  22. james says:

    Wow… Speechless, well done Sally. Hope this is not replacing Immortal code?

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  23. mario says:

    Mehnnn!! U won’t kill somebody with this suspense of yours…… My heart beats 2 per seconds…can’t wait for the next episode #thumbs up#

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  24. Deedee says:

    O boy! Am so luvin dis! Am a writer myself bt I can see I hvnt started @ all! I luv d way u express ursef! Bin lukin 4 a Nigerian writer as mentor. It just mite b u!!!

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  25. oscarpoems oscarpoems says:

    I made sure I didn’t read till my attention won’t be divided. I’m vindicated. I unconsciously readjusted my seating when the drama began…Marie (or whoever it is) in Cyprus, Jimi almost going bunkers, Tersoo offering to help…
    This is gonna be 1 ride none can afford to miss.
    Front row go dull person, I want a slightly advanced seat biko.
    You rock Sal, azzin eh, na you biko!

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  26. izu says:

    Wow loving this suspense ………. Nice work …don’t kill us with suspense n when are we expecting the next episode

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  27. kas says:

    This series is gonna be off da hook, see as suspense nearly killed me. Well done sally.

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  28. pgent1 says:

    oh boy just see wetin aunty sally write,chei i dey jealous dis talent gidi gan ni,honestly i didn’t want d story 2 end cos d suspence is killing….a million tuale 2 u sally,u’re just d best

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  29. Your writing is amazing. You breathe life into your characters making your readers glue to them.

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  30. consyspark says:

    sally is at it again.. Only God knows what you are cooking in this pot of yours.but whatever it is am ever ready with my plate and spoon….

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  31. olowodammy says:

    @sally have come where sre u taking us to

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  32. che-koh! says:

    Advanced seat here I comeeeee

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  33. HaroldWrites says:

    OH MY WORD! This is some effing serious sh*t! See ghen ghen of life! I am so proud of this story and wish I could take credit for it! The transition is just so effortless, the emotions are natural, the story, fast-paced. Wow. Well done, Moskeda (what’s that your real name again?)!

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  34. Ifeanyi Onochie says:

    God bless the day I stumbled upon Moskeda Pages. My word! ( -????? -???? ) Such quality writing cannot be found anywhere else in the Nigerian blogosphere! If you eventually don’t do more than blogging, I’ll never forgive you.

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  35. Clarion says:

    Wooohoooo! What a way to end my day ;D. And what an unexpected twist. Marie didn’t die? Next episode please!!!

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  36. Grant says:

    Wow is all I can say. I was blown away. Please finish the story. Good job my dear, good jod. Even Hollywood can’t produce stuff like this. God bless you and grant u more wisdom for more fabulous writing.

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  37. @DrisUnique says:

    Sally
    I love u so Much
    U are a good writer dear !

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  38. Miss b says:

    Sally,am still speechless

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  39. Onyinye says:

    Sally have started again oooo….. Ur creativity n mind set in writing is just superb….U re a very talented, great writer. Am so loving dis already!!!

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  40. itheword says:

    …….
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    HOLY SHIT!
    *faints*
    Another Sally knockout. Where is Episode 2? You think money is the only motive for kidnapping people??

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  41. roy says:

    Knew there is a twist @ her death nd see where sally brut it to an end jst as II was lookin forward to what he was goin to do to terdo..chai, yu er blessed nd gifted sally.I’m hoping this wil beta TTAV…

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  42. olajide yetunde says:

    Wow!!!! This is indeed breathtaking am so impressed wit dis write up can’t wait to read d concluding part. Tnx to my frnd dat introduced me to ur blog am nt disappointed more grease to ur elbow ama ff u on twitter nd kindly ff back.

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  43. maxxokoedion says:

    what a story and what manner of spinning it! had my heart racing from crescendo to crescendo! you are gifted!

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  44. koffie says:

    My suspicions started from the phonecall to the tears, to the “love me like its your last”. And Jimi’s issues run deep; looking at the help for the first time ever. Madam Sally, I hope you know you’re my favourite Nigerian writer/blogger. I’d like to have you as a mentor but I’d probably be a bad protege as I’m such a lazy writer. Good work anyways

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  45. Marylyn says:

    Hmmmmm….anoda lovely piece*winks* am luvin it!

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  46. kenny says:

    Jesus oooooo,sally will not kill mi wit suspence ooooo,how do u do this self,ur work is jst off dis world.

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  47. ekpo eze says:

    Already enthralled! Mosky, where u dey get ur inspiration? Please hint a brother…wow!

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  48. Kenny says:

    Where is d 2nd episode,the suspense is too much

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  49. Chinweike says:

    Got this link earlier today, did a quick scroll and thought it too long, so I just procrastinated like I do with everything else. But I must say when I finally got around to reading it, I didn’t pause for once, its constructed in a way to draw the reader in, the story keeps suggesting the next incidence but not revealing, until the very end, even therein, not fully. Very nicely done, look forward to subsequent ones.

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  50. enajyte says:

    I can’t believe I didn’t comment after reading this the first time. Yes, I just read it again. That good.

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  51. iamtimayin says:

    Wow! So Marie Eloped.

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  52. nai says:

    sally wat r u doing to me o,so marie didn’t die?????? na wa I don die wake up again chai sally,u r too good!!!

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  53. Anavami says:

    wow

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  54. laryoo says:

    Hahahaha… See me skipping lines just to get to the end!!! Nice one Moskeda

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  55. I told you I was reading right from the start yeah?

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  56. Winicares says:

    Omo see suspense im reading yet another interesting story of Sally. why Marie why?

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