Deception #1 by @newnaija

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10 Responses

  1. josephine says:

    Aunty Sally, God bless you for your efforts. I did enjoy this piece!

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  2. toyenlon says:

    OK. It is well with you, do take it easy with work o & don’t over stress urself. Take care.

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  3. jessie says:

    take tins
    ‘wayoli’ (easy) 4hrs is too short

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  4. anita says:

    Hmmm so did deception plenty no work 4 me today,just to read, Tnks sally

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  5. Yakori says:

    I read all the 7 series of this story since Monday but couldn’t drop any comment. I was heart broken there wasn’t more episodes to feast on. I hope you’re consistent as Sally so you’ll post the next installment soon.

    I really love this series because it’s a different setting from the contemporary fiction stories. Particularly depicting the northern royal household. It’s intriguing and written intensely. My concern is that, the episodes are short. Pleaseeeee can you lengthen it?

    Safiya’s character paints an adventurous yet shy young lady. I love how you conceived her. Mostly such similar character of hers, end up hating men. Due to the fact they’re molested, so it’s natural for them to exhibit such behaviors.
    But in Safiya’s case, she ended up enjoying the experience. Her desires betrayed her moral values, hence suckling the pleasures of the forbidden fruit.

    Shehu on the other hand is your contemporary young man. Suave, handsome nobleman. I’m sure he regrets his indulgence that caused him to be infertile. I wonder how that’ll be mended.
    It’s only fair of him to save her pride and his as well by feigning their genuine state. Even though in most cases, the man ends up humiliating the lady in question. I have a feeling love will encapsulate both of them in the subsequent episodes. The consequent predicament they’re facing will strengthen their union. Thus, understanding, care and love will be etched in them.

    The only cause of concern is the Emirs staunch and unyielding attitude. I wonder how he’ll let them be without his wrath striking them. Hopefully, nothing bad will transpire since this is a delicate matter and can’t be made public. Knowledge of such can taint the royal dynasty and their reputation will be affected for life.
    The guards that are privy of this information should really be warned. Or perhaps they should be under an oath of secrecy. Failure to do that will spell doom for them. That’s a sinister option but might work, even though it can boomerang later on.

    Hoping to read more from this series. A thrilling and engaging write. Penned impeccably. Welldone.
    Kudos!

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    • isaacola AA says:

      Thanks boss. I really appreciate the effort. One or two more episodes to go. We are having some technical issue from the boss editing it. I hope it will be fixed ASAP. Thanks once again.

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  6. Gloria A says:

    A very catchy series…. Nice piece!!

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  7. Lolade says:

    Just catching up on my reading and this seems really interesting…*fingerscrossed*

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