The Chronicles Of An Adopted Child #7 – Semione Abi

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  1. adekola funmilola says:

    This is the very first episode I read n understood everything without reading it the second time. Getting more interesting! Good job.

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  2. AOS says:

    Good job….KIU.

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  3. Phortunate says:

    Good. But I think you have to work on your tenses. It is pretty disjointed most times..continues going back and forth that I (we) forget where we are. All d same, well done.

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    • Semione Abi says:

      Thanks @Phortunate…tbh I’ve been working hard on that, but seems all my editors keep letting me down.

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      • Nate says:

        You can’t blame your editors for your tense issues. You’re a writer, you’re supposed to know the difference between past and present tense. If you don’t, please ask someone to teach you or go on the net. by now, you ought to have learned this. your writing should progress

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  4. Ustyn says:

    Quite a nice story but more like one of the commenter said,its abit confusing with the tenses at times….good work and more grace to write more

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  5. adeola gem says:

    For me semione, i loved it. Keep it up, it can be better…good read.

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  6. calabargal says:

    Dr Dick & Karen! Dont know whether o laugh, hope or be shocked. This episode was quite tense…

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  7. calabargal says:

    Dr Dick & Karen! Dont know whether to laugh, hope or be shocked. This episode was quite tense…

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