Abducted (Prologue) By Gere Ochuko

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17 Responses

  1. tessy says:

    this is dark and I guess it will be revealing. well done

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  2. amaka says:

    Nice piece…I tink you should read sally’s work though,it will help wen u put ur write ups togeda..kudos

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  3. Tife says:

    I like it. The first paragraph. Her heart beat was like a racing car. How like a racing car? Shiny like a racing car? Fast like a racing car. Never forget to complete your similes. Good work

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  4. seyifunmi says:

    Nice write up.

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  5. Gere Ochuko says:

    Thanks for reading and for the comments, it’s helped.

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  6. Gere Ochuko says:

    Thanks for reading and for the comments, it helped.

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  7. phaevour says:

    owk……uhm i fink u cn do beta
    bt anyway nice 1

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  8. phaevour says:

    owk……uhm i fink u cn do beta bt anyway nice 1

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  9. Nwanne says:

    A number of errors and fragmentation. For example, the second line should have been: ‘She had thought she could get some sleep without the sleeping pills; something she had not done in over a decade.’ Edit, edit, edit. Good job though.

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  10. erhinharyo says:

    Nice one

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  11. tomii says:

    A good one tho, but am lost and can’t seem to grasp the real meaning of the story. Gere over to you, and you too sally..pls wow us with this series.

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  12. sarah says:

    Nice one but try to read through ur piece to avoid omission of words

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  13. MissBosola says:

    Nice write up. I would. Check out your blog.

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  14. AOS says:

    Waiting for next episode, Keep Writing. Nice job.

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  15. Tesh Says says:

    So full of grammatical errors….made it kinda difficult to enjoy. You are off to a good start though.

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