Abducted #1 By Gere Ochuko

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7 Responses

  1. OYIN says:

    Gere, I’ll advise you on a couple of things
    1. Your tense. Either choose present or past tense
    2. Your profile picture is not engaging. You look kind of angry. A smiley face will endear people to you.
    3. Read. Read. Read!
    Otherwise, nice work

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  2. sarah says:

    I hve read and I didn’t see anything wrong with ur tenses except that this episode is too short and very interesting, I can’t wait till the truth behind Disiree’s hatred of her family is reveal, well done Ochuko, more ink to ur pen

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  3. anita says:

    Well well well, still trying to wrap my head around d story

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  4. anita says:

    Well well well, still trying to wrap my head around d story a nice try

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